After a really really REALLY long time I've added something to my gallery. A new short. And I really need some critique on it.

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Do read and let me know what you think.
I also have two more short stories and a poem that I'll be putting up sometime soon. RAWR!

On a side note, thanks to the new revised Llama levels I have- wait for it- A SUPER ALBINO LLAMA! WOOHOO! m/